Thank you for your interest in our game! Before we can accept you into Snowblind, we would like to see the following revisions:

We would like to see an expansion of her personality section, particularly in regards to her flaws. We would also like to see how her flaws will impact her survival in Norfinbury in regards to the suitability section.

Please reply to this comment with your revisions within three days or your slot will be forfeit.