While we are glad you have interest in joining our game, we regret to inform you that we cannot accept your application at this time.
Most of your application is fine! However, the personality section is so short that we would require you essentially write a new personality section, which is beyond the scope of our revision requests. We encourage you to read over the application guide regarding what we want out of a personality section and, in general, to make sure the personality section includes more discussion and explanation of the character's traits and the motivations behind them. Please do give it another shot next month; we're pretty sure this was simply a misunderstanding of how this RPing format works application-wise.
You may apply again during the next application cycle if you wish to do so, although please note you may only try to apply for the same character three times.
REJECTED
Most of your application is fine! However, the personality section is so short that we would require you essentially write a new personality section, which is beyond the scope of our revision requests. We encourage you to read over the application guide regarding what we want out of a personality section and, in general, to make sure the personality section includes more discussion and explanation of the character's traits and the motivations behind them. Please do give it another shot next month; we're pretty sure this was simply a misunderstanding of how this RPing format works application-wise.
You may apply again during the next application cycle if you wish to do so, although please note you may only try to apply for the same character three times.