While we are glad you have interest in joining our game, we regret to inform you that we cannot accept your application at this time.
Unfortunately, we feel that the application lacks cohesion as a whole, partially due to a canon point with few known canon details. Certain aspects of the chosen canon point and personality section lack critical elaboration, such as what aspects of Dissidia 012 would be incorporated and more depth as to how two years in solitude would affect Kain's current personality. Additionally, we feel that Kain's characterization as described in the personality section and demonstrated in the samples is sometimes at odds with his behavior as seen in FFIV and Dissidia 012, and the quality of writing fluctuates throughout.
You may apply again during the next application cycle if you wish to do so, although please note you may only try to apply for the same character three times.
REJECTED
Unfortunately, we feel that the application lacks cohesion as a whole, partially due to a canon point with few known canon details. Certain aspects of the chosen canon point and personality section lack critical elaboration, such as what aspects of Dissidia 012 would be incorporated and more depth as to how two years in solitude would affect Kain's current personality. Additionally, we feel that Kain's characterization as described in the personality section and demonstrated in the samples is sometimes at odds with his behavior as seen in FFIV and Dissidia 012, and the quality of writing fluctuates throughout.
You may apply again during the next application cycle if you wish to do so, although please note you may only try to apply for the same character three times.