Thank you for your interest in our game! Before we can accept you into Snowblind, we would like to see the following revisions:
We would like to see a bit more expansion upon Viktor's flaws in the personality section, as currently, it's mostly focused on his positive traits. Additionally, we request another sample set in Snowblind's setting, as well as a small revision to the suitability section, so that we have a clearer idea as to how Viktor will react to Norfinbury's darker aspects. The information given in these sections is somewhat vague and does not provide much insight as to the development that could be expected of Viktor in a situation like this.
Please reply to this comment with your revisions within three days or your slot will be forfeit.
REVISION REQUEST
We would like to see a bit more expansion upon Viktor's flaws in the personality section, as currently, it's mostly focused on his positive traits. Additionally, we request another sample set in Snowblind's setting, as well as a small revision to the suitability section, so that we have a clearer idea as to how Viktor will react to Norfinbury's darker aspects. The information given in these sections is somewhat vague and does not provide much insight as to the development that could be expected of Viktor in a situation like this.
Please reply to this comment with your revisions within three days or your slot will be forfeit.