Thank you for your interest in our game! Before we can accept you into Snowblind, we would like to see the following revisions:
We feel that the personality section needs expansion; while it touches on the basics of his character well enough, but we would like to see you go a bit more in-depth with the points you've covered and his character in general. Additionally, his samples are too short; the network post doesn't meet the ten-comment minimum, and the introspective third person is a bit too short on its own. We request expansion of these, either with new samples or via threads you may have already written.
Please reply to this comment with your revisions within three days or your slot will be forfeit.
REVISION REQUEST
We feel that the personality section needs expansion; while it touches on the basics of his character well enough, but we would like to see you go a bit more in-depth with the points you've covered and his character in general. Additionally, his samples are too short; the network post doesn't meet the ten-comment minimum, and the introspective third person is a bit too short on its own. We request expansion of these, either with new samples or via threads you may have already written.
Please reply to this comment with your revisions within three days or your slot will be forfeit.