Thank you for your interest in our game! Before we can accept you into Snowblind, we would like to see the following revisions:

The personality section provided currently reads more like a history section, with descriptions of events provided but not enough analysis of Xanxus's reactions as they pertain to his personality. For example, his unpredictable behavior during the battles for the Rings is not well explained. We would like to see an addition to the personality section that provides more of this analysis without as many details from his background distracting from it.

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