Thank you for your interest in our game! Before we can accept you into Snowblind, we would like to see the following revisions:
Your personality section reads a bit like a background section and we would like you to expand a bit more in-depth on the traits you've covered. We would also like to know if the utility belt will be empty and what the filter mask is in more detail. Additionally, we need a network sample in addition to the samples you've provided us.
Please reply to this comment with your revisions within three days or your slot will be forfeit.
REVISION REQUEST
Your personality section reads a bit like a background section and we would like you to expand a bit more in-depth on the traits you've covered. We would also like to know if the utility belt will be empty and what the filter mask is in more detail. Additionally, we need a network sample in addition to the samples you've provided us.
Please reply to this comment with your revisions within three days or your slot will be forfeit.