Thank you for your interest in our game! Before we can accept you into Snowblind, we would like to see the following revisions:

Your personality section reads very much like a history section; we see things that happened to Neku, but you don't delve very much into his thoughts and driving motivations. We would like to see more of that in your application. Additionally, we would like a sample that contains more of Neku's dialog. You can either write this yourself or use a thread from an old RP.

Please reply to this comment with your revisions within three days or your slot will be forfeit.