Thank you for your interest in our game! Before we can accept you into Snowblind, we would like to see the following revisions:
Your samples seem to suggest that there is more coherence in Brian than one would be led to believe at first blush. Because there seem to be times when it comes through (and it would be difficult to play the character otherwise--to clarify, we are dubious as to if the character would have enough canon to be appable), we would like an expansion of the personality section to include what Brian was like before the Operator's influence and how it may come through in Snowblind.
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REVISION REQUEST
Your samples seem to suggest that there is more coherence in Brian than one would be led to believe at first blush. Because there seem to be times when it comes through (and it would be difficult to play the character otherwise--to clarify, we are dubious as to if the character would have enough canon to be appable), we would like an expansion of the personality section to include what Brian was like before the Operator's influence and how it may come through in Snowblind.
Please reply to this comment with your revisions within three days or your slot will be forfeit.