Thank you for your interest in our game! Before we can accept you into Snowblind, we would like to see the following revisions:
Unfortunately, the samples provided do not have enough comments to count as two separate samples. Please provide an additional sample. We would also like to ask that this sample showcase a situation in which Phi would be less likely to maintain her composure. Her usual behavior has been demonstrated sufficiently in the provided samples, so we would like to see an execution of her occasional emotional outbursts and how an environment like Norfinbury might push her to react this way.
Please reply to this comment with your revisions within three days or your slot will be forfeit.
REVISION REQUEST
Unfortunately, the samples provided do not have enough comments to count as two separate samples. Please provide an additional sample. We would also like to ask that this sample showcase a situation in which Phi would be less likely to maintain her composure. Her usual behavior has been demonstrated sufficiently in the provided samples, so we would like to see an execution of her occasional emotional outbursts and how an environment like Norfinbury might push her to react this way.
Please reply to this comment with your revisions within three days or your slot will be forfeit.